User:Dobbs.sj/sandbox

"Article Evaluation"
 * first sentence feels too short and unfinished. Go into it's time and impact (more detailed opening/summary) - fixed
 * more contact improvisation pioneers than just Steve Paxton -fixed
 * "education tool"- change 'regular' to 'classical' -fixed

"non-performative performance" section: -fixed
 * round robins aren't strictly duos, can be trios, groups of four, etc. -fixed

"Similar explorations at the same time" "various definitions attempt to...." - fixed
 * consider title -fixed

-checked sources from citation, all are up to date and sources support the claims in the article. -the article is neutral and unbiased