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Week 2 Questions for Sociology of Sport- Human Kinetics- University of Windsor ~
 * 1) Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Although most factual information is referenced I did notice that the 2010 Brier results in Paragraph 3 were not referenced at all.
 * 2) Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article? After carefully checking every link on the article I noticed 2 contradicting article links. The first showed a biography saying he was married with 0 children and the 2nd is referenced to say he has 2 children but upon opening the link there was no evidence/information showing that he had children. I do not believe there was close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article although the previous point could also be used for the answer to question 1 where the reference could be seen as unreliable.
 * 3) Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I do believe information in the first few sentences of paragraph 3 were not necessarily underrepresented but were very choppy and poorly written. It seems as if multiple writers took the time to add information and facts but not necessarily blend the information together. I do believe a more effective use of transition words could benefit this article immensely.

*********** WEEK 3: As soon as I made my post I realized I had made a mistake in the citing. Within minutes I tried to go back and fix them but someone had already edited and fixed my citation error. I have included the changes he made here so you can see the proper citations are being used and what my original post was. Just don't want to lose marks on the citations because I didn't have a chance to fix them before someone had done it. Thank s

Week 3- Edit to Kevin Koe page Chief Jim Koe of Aklavik, Kevins' Grandfather, was the pioneer behind the families involvement in curling. Kevins' father, Fred Koe, a politician and former skip, participated at the 1999 Canadian Mixed Curling Championship Jaime and Kerry. The Koe family, received a recognition award at the Aboriginal Sports Circle of Northwest Territories awards dinner, for their years of service in the curling community. Kevin, who was born in Yellowknife, attended Ecole Sir John Franklin High school, where he was later inducted into the Falcons Hall of Fame, before moving to Alberta to attend the University of Calgary. Kevin was the recipient of the 2016 Scott-Mamini Memorial Award winner for Male Athlete of the Year.

Personal life
His brother, Jamie Koe, has represented the Territories in four of the last five Briers, while his sister Kerry has represented the Territories in five of the last six Scotties Tournament of Hearts. Chief Jim Koe of Aklavik, Kevins' Grandfather, was the pioneer behind the families involvement in curling. Kevins' father, Fred Koe, a politician and former skip, participated at the 1999 Canadian Mixed Curling Championship along side Jaime and Kerry. The Koe family, received a recognition award at the Aboriginal Sports Circle of Northwest Territories awards dinner, for their years of service in the curling community. Kevin, who was born in Yellowknife, attended Ecole Sir John Franklin High school, where he was later inducted into the Falcons Hall of Fame, before moving to Alberta to attend the University of Calgary. Kevin was the recipient of the 2016 Scott-Mamini Memorial Award, for Male Athlete of the Year. Koe works as a surface landman for Repsol Oil & Gas Canada. He is married and has two children.