User:DoctorBoon/Isabelle Arsenault/CiGaLynch Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? DoctorBoon
 * Link to draft you're reviewing Link to Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Link to the current version

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Tone and Balance
You provided neutral tone to deliver information in the biography part of Isabelle Arsenault's Wikipedia Page. In this text you managed to show facts without imposing your personal opinion or a point of view. While reading I never felt like I was oriented towards a way of thinking but just gathering informations.

Organization and Content
I feel like your article gives a good overview of Arsenault's career and her journey to arrive where she is now. I think you could have added maybe some sub-headings about her works to maybe show the reader more of a list-like referencing of what she did.It might also give a better looking presentation to your article. Compared to the original article there is not much space and air to show the content to the reader. Maybe could inspire yourself more of the structure that the original article has.

References and Sources
You added the references and citations for the information you have written. 5 sources seem to be enough to support your article. The original article seems to have more sources, maybe could also take a look at them to add more information.

Images/Media
You took a recent picture of Isabelle Arsenault describing it very precisely. If you have time you could maybe expand the infobox just underneath.

Overall Impressions
You meet most of the assignments requirements if you contiue to work a bit on it you will end up with a very nice article! Do your best to keep it simple while you refine it. I can't wait to follow up your work on this article and see how you continue it. I would mainly focus on how you present your page so that the reader will read it with more ease and pleasure. The quality content that you have makes the neutral way that Wikipedia requires to write articles shine through!