User:Dohanminhtho/Acid rain/Just.Awale Peer Review

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Dohanminhtho
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dohanminhtho/Acid_rain?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead is very good, article is also sectioned very well. I like how you included the federal government's recommendation, I think I'll do something similar. For your references, be sure to have at least one more in there, I believe this course requires a minimum of 10 sources.

Nice job!