User:Dohanminhtho/Acid rain/Pandas forest Peer Review

General info
Dohanminhtho
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft reviewed:User:Dohanminhtho/Acid rain
 * Link to the current version of the article:Acid rain

Evaluation of Drafted Changes
At first, I was concerned about the validity of your evidence supporting the fact that acid rain does have observable direct human health impacts. This is especially due to the fact that the original article states there are no human health impacts in its Human health effects section. Perhaps this is due to a discrepancy in the effects of the rain and disolved particles itself vs the particulates in the atmosphere that cause acid rain the first place. It seems like the particulates themselves may have the major negative effect. Otherwise, for the most part, I like what you have.