User:Dollface717/Asgard/Jgarcia30911 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dollface717


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asgard

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe find other things to add in the intro. Seems like the intro that is in the current article. Also, maybe check YC database for more helpful and good resources for info.