User:Dominic.fettig/sandbox


 * 1) The biggest issue I see with this article is the lack of content. While there is not a major amount of information, there is a general definition. I hope to find defined history and background on the disorder, and more information overall.

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Conceicao, E., PhD, Orcutt, M., DO, Mitchell, J., MD, Engel, S., PhD, LaHaise, K., PhD, Jorgensen, M., MD,. . . Wonderlich, S., PhD. (2012). Eating disorders after bariatric surgery: A case series. International Journal of Eating Disorders, 46(3). doi: https://doi.org/10.1002/eat.22074

The authors are from Eating Disorders Institute in Fargo! J.R. Council (talk) 18:59, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

Chatoor, I., MD, Conley, C., MD, & Dickson, L., MS. (1988). Food Refusal After An Incident of Choking: A Posttraumatic Eating Disorder. Journal of the American Academy of Child & Adolescent Psychiatry, 27(1), 105-110. doi:10.1097/00004583-198801000-00016

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- If the eating disorder is not completely accepted universally - how do we effectively make a page on that topic? I believe it will be difficult to find complete evidence on this topic, but overall, I do imagine it to be possible.


 * It doesn't have to be in DSM-5 for you to write about it. The way disorders get codified in DSM is that people write about them and come to a consensus that they are "real" and signficant. J.R. Council (talk) 19:13, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

-I appreciate this assignment greatly, as it benefits not only myself but other scholars and students around the world overall. I am excited to learn more about this disorder and implement it around Wikipedia. Dominic Fettig 04:55, 5 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Glad you like it.

The reason your signature didn't take was that you weren't in Edit source mode. To switch, click on the Pencil icon in the upper right corner. As it is, I don't know who made this contribution. J.R. Council (talk) 19:15, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

Problems with the article
One problem with this article is that there is little information about chew and spit except for a definition. In fact the definition is not all that correct either. There is no categorization of Chew ans Spit as to if it is its own eating disorder or if it is related to another specific eating disorder. After researching a little I found information that will help to further define and categorize chew and spit so that it is better understandable.

Questions: The questions I have about the assignment is while citing my sources I was trying to italicize the journals as is done in regular citation in APA however the talk page seems to not let me do this. Is there a way to do this? and if so how? The other question I have is, are we not supposed to use research studies as references? I was told by a classmate we were not supposed to do this. If so, I'm not sure where to look for references because most if not all of psychInfo usually are research articles/reports.


 * You won't be doing your refs. in APA stye. Use the drop down menu in edit mode, or use the Wikipedia reference guide https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners
 * The thing about research papers comes from an old ban on "original research". If it is a refereed journal article, you can use it. If it is unpublished research, you can't.

Refrences:

Wilson, G. T., & Walsh, B. T. (1991). Eating disorders in the DSM-IV. Journal of Abnormal Psychology, 100(3), 362–365. https://doi-org.ezproxy.lib.ndsu.nodak.edu/10.1037/0021-843X.100.3.362

Guarda, A. S., Coughlin, J. W., Cummings, M., Marinilli, A., Haug, N., Boucher, M., & Heinberg, L. J. (2004). Chewing and spitting in eating disorders and its relationship to binge eating. Eating Behaviors, 5(3), 231–239. https://doi-org.ezproxy.lib.ndsu.nodak.edu/10.1016/j.eatbeh.2004.01.001

SFurcht (talk) 19:31, 4 October 2018 (UTC)

To Do List
SFurcht (talk) 15:46, 12 October 2018 (UTC) Dominic Fettig 04:28, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Develop a more comprehensive and well written definition
 * Link and describe how chew and spit is associated with Bulimia Nervosa, Anorexia Nervosa, and other Eating disorders.
 * Change format of article so it is no longer a list format
 * Add titles and sections to the article
 * Introduce in prose format instead of list format to allow for update.
 * Add history section
 * Add consequences section
 * Add advantages/disadvantages section
 * Add possible treatments section
 * Add info box for disease/treatments
 * Add table of contents


 * This looks good but please consolidate your to-do list. J.R. Council (talk) 21:19, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Don't forget commitments - indicate which tasks you will be responsible for. J.R. Council (talk) 21:28, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Outline
1. Chew and Spit definition, compensatory behavior, way to taste forbidden foods A. Summary of following information i. Definition ii. Compensatory behavior iii. Way to taste forbidden foods 2. Frequency and tendency A. 34% of Individuals with eating disorders partake in CS   B. Younger individuals more likely to partake C. little to no personality predictor however body dissatisfaction increased likelihood D. occurs in episodes 3. Consequences A. Restricted Dieting B. Potential Gateway C. Severe Food Obsession D. Financial difficulties  4. Treatment A. Similar treatment to main disorder i. Bulimia Nervosa ii. Anorexia Nervosa iii. cognitive behavioral therapy 5. Studies A. Past i. Fairly new research area ii. Categorized as a symptom not disorder B. Present C. Future i. Affects on the body and digestive system Dominic Fettig 04:38, 13 October 2018 (UTC) SFurcht (talk) 04:40, 13 October 2018 (UTC) SFurcht (talk) 04:48, 13 October 2018 (UTC)

Just for the record, the reason most of your outline is in grayed-out blocks is that there are one or more blank leading spaces on those lines. There is a way to use Wikipedia formatting code to do outlines, but that's okay. Don't forget to state commitments for tasks. Worth some points. J.R. Council (talk) 21:44, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

You might also refer to Rumination disorder involves the regular regurgitation of food that occurs for at least one month. Regurgitated food may be re-chewed, re-swallowed, or spit out. J.R. Council (talk) 21:53, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Lead section- Shyla Furcht
Chew and Spit (CHSP or CS) is a compensatory behavior associated with several eating disorders that involves Regurgitating or the chewing of food and spitting it out before swallowing, often as an attempt to avoid ingesting unwanted calories and nutrition. CS is often used as a way to taste foods viewed as "forbidden" or unhealthy. Individuals who partake in CS have been recorded to have an increased desire for thinness, increased lack of control (LOC) and body dissatisfaction. Individuals often use CS for different functions such as replacing vomiting and binging or as an additional behaviors. Partaking in CS is associated with and can lead to restricted dieting and severe food obsession both risk factors of eating disorders. CS can be a gateway to more serious symptoms of eating disorders which are damaging for ones health. Most commonly Chewing and Spitting is a known symptom of bulimia nervosa as stated in the DSM-V. Treatment for CS has not yet been developed however researchers suggest similar treatment to the main eating disorder the patient may have or show signs of. The treatment most often used for eating disorders is Cognitive Behavioral Therapy. SFurcht (talk) 15:41, 29 October 2018 (UTC) SFurcht (talk) 11:35, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback: Make sure to tag the wikipedia article for everything that can be tagged, such as "DSM-V". Also, there is some slight organization things that could be changed, such as the order of explanation, symptoms, and treatment. Better organization can end up having a more well-versed article. Also, be sure to check spelling, as sometimes common words can be spelled wrong. Overall, the lead section was good, and I think we can incorporate portions of both of ours to come up with a good lead section overall! Dominic Fettig 17:48, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Lead Section - Dominic Fettig
Chew and Spit (CHSP or CS) is a symptom to Bulimia Nervosa characterized by the Regurgitation of food, simply described as "chewing and spitting". Individuals that suffer from CS indulge in this behavior to remove unwanted or unnecessary calories as a result of a eating disorder. Many sufferers utilize CS as a way to taste foods they would consider unhealthy or typically called "forbidden". CS is most commonly described as a symptom of Bulimia Nervosa, an eating disorder specified in the DSM-5. Most people that partake in CS are shown to have put higher value in "thinness" and severe food obsession. While CS is a common symptom of Bulimia, this activity can be a gateway into more serious eating disorders and mental health issues. There is no defined treatment of CS, as of yet; however, Cognitive Behavioral Therapy has been shown to reduce symptoms of Bulimia and other eating disorders. Explaining that they symptoms of CS may be reduced with CBT. Dominic Fettig 17:35, 29 October 2018 (UTC) Overall I think you have good information in your section. I would be careful with some of your wording you made it sound as though bulimia nervosa is the only disorder with this symptom and that is results in an eating disorder when this may not be always true. I think it would benefit us to look into the correlation between an eating disorder and CS to see if they do always occur together. Besides that your lead had a nice flow to it. SFurcht (talk) 02:50, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments on leads
I'm commenting on both leads here, as well as your comments on each other's leads. J.R. Council (talk) 21:49, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) First, nice job, both of you!
 * 2) It's a good question where c&s fits into bulimia criteria and other eating. It is not specified as a symptom in DSM VI or V. Since the food is not actually ingested, it's not really regurgitated. Although you don't mention this, it seems like it could also be a symptom of anorexia. It would be good to explore where exactly c&s fits in the symptom pictures of both disorders. (Note: I don't have a copy of DSM V handy, but searching on the criteria doesn't show C&S as a symptom of either anorexia or bulimia.)
 * 3) I think both versions of the lead have merit. I trust you to use your best judgment to combine the two. Just don't list C&S and a specific symptom of any disorders unless it is actually listed in DSM.

New Lead section
Chew and Spit (CHSP or CS) is a compensatory behavior associated with several eating disorders that involves the chewing of food and spitting it out before swallowing, often as an attempt to avoid ingestion of unwanted or unnecessary calories. CS can be used as a way to taste food viewed as “forbidden” or unhealthy. Individuals who partake in CS typically have an increased desire for thinness, increased lack of control (LOC) and body dissatisfaction. CS can serve different functions such as replacing vomiting and/or binging or as an additional behavior to many eating disorders. CS is characterized as a symptom that can belong to various different disorders, which can make it difficult to treat. There has been no defined treatment of CS as of now; however, Cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) has been shown to reduce symptoms of eating disorders such as bulimia nervosa, anorexia nervosa and many others. SFurcht (talk) 01:59, 8 November 2018 (UTC) Dominic Fettig 06:06, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Dr. Council's comments
You've done a really nice job on this. There's not a huge amount of information on this condition, so it's not going to be a vary long article. This lead is a good size and amount of detail for your topic. J.R. Council (talk) 04:43, 19 November 2018 (UTC)
 * If you haven't started already, please proceed to writing the main body of the article. Just flesh out the lead, and add additional information at the appropriate spots.
 * Be sure to break your article into its main parts, and add section and subsection titles to organize and make it easy for the reader to follow.

=Dr. Council's comments on Assignment 8 = You've done a good job on this, but now you need to do some careful editing. In general, you need to proofread carefully -- there are a some grammatical errors. In addition, you need to break up some run-on sentences. I will make specific comments in the relevant places in your article. J.R. Council (talk) 05:06, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Assignment 9
Excellent job! I like how you've included the original and revised versions in the same section. I'm sending the link to user:Ian (Wiki Ed) for his comments. J.R. Council (talk) 00:54, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Chew and spit
Chew and spit (CHSP or CS) is a compensatory behavior associated with several eating disorders that involves the chewing of food and spitting it out before swallowing, often as an attempt to avoid ingestion of unwanted or unnecessary calories. CS can be used as a way to taste food viewed as “forbidden” or unhealthy. Individuals who partake in CS typically have an increased desire for thinness, increased lack of control (LOC) and body dissatisfaction. CS can serve different functions such as replacing vomiting and/or binging or as an additional behavior to many eating disorders. CS is characterized as a symptom that can belong to various different disorders, which can make it difficult to treat. There has been no defined treatment of CS as of now; however, Cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) has been shown to reduce symptoms of eating disorders such as bulimia nervosa, anorexia nervosa and many others. SFurcht (talk) 01:59, 22 November 2018 (UTC)


 * The sentence I put in italics does not make a logical statement. J.R. Council (talk) 05:28, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Updated Final draft For this section:

Chew and Spit (CHSP or CS) is a compensatory behavior associated with several eating disorders that involves the chewing of food and spitting it out before swallowing, often as an attempt to avoid ingestion of unwanted or unnecessary calories. CS can be used as a way to taste food viewed as “forbidden” or unhealthy. Individuals who partake in CS typically have an increased desire for thinness, increased lack of control (LOC) and body dissatisfaction. CS can serve different functions such as replacing vomiting and/or binging or as an additional behavior to many eating disorders. CS and like behaviors has been found in several different eating disorders, making it difficult to find a treatment that works as a cure-all. There has been no defined treatment of CS as of now; however, Cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) has been shown to reduce negative behaviors involved in eating disorders such as bulimia nervosa, anorexia nervosa and many others. SFurcht (talk) 18:22, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Consequences and treatments
Chew and Spit is often associated with and may be a potential gateway to more severe dieting behaviors. Individuals who use CS as a compensatory behavior are more likely to be diagnosed or develop eating disorders. The likelihood is dependent upon the severity of food obsession present. Treatments to eliminate the behavior of chewing and spiting have not yet been developed. However, given the correlation with eating disorders, research suggest treatments that are used for eating disorders such as, Cognitive Behavioral Therapy, may also be effective for eliminating Chewing and Spitting behaviors. SFurcht (talk) 01:42, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

Frequency and tendency
Throughout studies relating to Chew and Spit, it was seen that 34% of individuals with eating disorders partake in CS. This includes all eating disorders such as bulimia, anorexia nervosa, and more. It has also been seen that younger individuals are more likely to participate in CS as the cognitive mind is still developing. While younger individuals are more likely, this does not determine personality or activity outside of eating behaviors. Overall, CS contributes to body dissatisfaction while body dissatisfaction contributes to CS. CS has also been seen to occur in episodes, rather than consistently. These episodes have been seen to be days to weeks long. Dominic Fettig 05:30, 22 November 2018 (UTC)


 * In italics:
 * 1) clumsy, drop this.
 * 2) more likely to what?
 * 3) Need to back up this statement with a citation

J.R. Council (talk) 06:05, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

UPDATED FINAL DRAFT FOR THIS SECTION IS BELOW: Throughout studies relating to Chew and Spit, it was seen that 34% of individuals with eating disorders partake in CS. This includes all eating disorders such as bulimia, anorexia nervosa, and more. It has also been found that younger individuals are more likely to participate in CS. While younger individuals are more likely to develop CS, this does not determine personality or activity outside of eating behaviors. Overall, CS contributes to body dissatisfaction while body dissatisfaction contributes to CS. CS has also been seen to occur in episodes, rather than consistently. These episodes have been seen to be days to weeks long. Dominic Fettig 18:22, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Further research
Chew and Spit has little research done on it regarding treatments, long term effects of chewing and spitting, and associations with other behaviors and eating disorders. More research is needed on his topic to further understand the effect this behavior has on individuals physically and psychologically. SFurcht (talk) 02:15, 22 November 2018 (UTC) Dominic Fettig 05:30, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

J.R. Council (talk) 06:07, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Italics - clumsy, rewrite this sentence.

UPDAED FINAL VERSION OF SECTION: Chew and Spit has not received much attention in the research industry regarding treatment, long term effects of chewing and spitting, and its associations with other behaviors and eating disorders. More research is needed on his topic to further understand the effect this behavior has on individuals physically and psychologically. SFurcht (talk) 18:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

More references
SFurcht (talk) 03:31, 12 October 2018 (UTC) SFurcht (talk) 03:51, 12 October 2018 (UTC) Dominic Fettig 04:38, 13 October 2018 (UTC)