User:DominicKittel/3D modeling/Minigun Man Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? DominicKittel
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: 3D modeling

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No, this doesn't seem to be a necessary change
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Some
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? I think it is pretty concise, there is a little bit of extra info, but the lead doesn't satisfy the third bullet point

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? The content added has mostly been grammar corrections
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There is info in the lead that doesn't have its own section
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? I don't think so

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? N/A, grammar changes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? The article has a banner at the top saying "This article needs additional citations for verification."
 * Are the sources current? Yes (this seems like a fairly new technology so I don't think the sources could be outdated)
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? At least one of the sources sounds like it was written by someone of Asian heritage
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? N/A

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media N/A


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? The article is easier to read
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Grammar is better
 * How can the content added be improved? The lead still looks like it could be bettered from what I can tell