User:DominicStanley1/UNC Greensboro Spartans men's soccer

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The UNC Greensboro Spartans men's soccer team is the varsity intercollegiate athletic team of University of North Carolina at Greensboro in Greensboro, North Carolina, United States. The UNCG Spartans have a three pronged coaching system run by head coach Chris Rich(2019) and assistant coaches Garrett McLaughlin(2018) and Jaime Ibarra(2019)

Historically, UNCG has been one of the most successful college soccer team in North Carolina. In the 1980s, UNCG, while still playing in NCAA Division III, won five NCAA Division III Men's Soccer Championships. In the mid-2000s, the Spartans reached three Sweet Sixteens in the NCAA Division I Men's Soccer Tournament. In the late 2000s and early 2010s, the program had several NCAA violations that caused the program to forfeit several losses.

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The UNC Greensboro Spartans men's soccer team is the varsity intercollegiate athletic team of University of North Carolina at Greensboro in Greensboro, North Carolina, United States. The team is a member of the Southern Conference, which is part of the National Collegiate Athletic Association's Division I. UNCG's first men's soccer team was fielded in 1971. The team plays its home games at UNCG Soccer Stadium in Greensboro. The UNCG Spartans have a three pronged coaching system run by head coach Chris Rich(2019) and assistant coaches Garrett McLaughlin(2018) and Jaime Ibarra(2019)

Historically, UNCG has been one of the most successful college soccer teams in North Carolina. In the 1980s, UNCG, while still playing in NCAA Division III, won five NCAA Division III Men's Soccer Championships. In the mid-2000s, the Spartans reached three Sweet Sixteens in the NCAA Division I Men's Soccer Tournament. In the late 2000s and early 2010s, the program had several NCAA violations that caused the program to forfeit several losses; In addition to the losses, the program also suffered the loss of their head coach at the time, a fine of $5,000 payable to the NCAA, and significant recruitment and recruitment communications suspensions.

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{End PG1 Sentence replacement} The UNCG Spartans have a three pronged coaching system run by head coach Chris Rich(2019) and assistant coaches Garrett McLaughlin(2018) and Jaime Ibarra(2019)

{End PG2 period replacement} ; In addition to the losses, the program also suffered the loss of their head coach at the time, a fine of $5,000 payable to the NCAA, and significant recruitment and recruitment communications suspensions.

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 * Stadium link change
 * Cach name change
 * Added assistant coach 1&2
 * All americans nationality changed from American to icelandic and puerto rican
 * NCAA Division I Honors year corrections
 * NCAA Division III Honors year corrections

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 * UNCG Official Source Group 1
 * https://uncgspartans.com/sports/mens-soccer/coaches
 * https://uncgspartans.com/sports/mens-soccer
 * https://uncgspartans.com/sports/mens-soccer/roster
 * Although these are all sourced from the party at hand, these pages are regulated by NCAA to maintain upkeep of the coaching, scheduling, and prospect rosters. Because of this we can rule these as reliable markers for names, dates, locations, and statistics; but not descriptions, terms, or statements on facilities.
 * UNCG Ex Source Group 2
 * https://www.ncsasports.org/athletic-scholarships/mens-soccer/north-carolina/university-of-north-carolina--greensboro
 * https://www.espn.com/soccer/team/results/_/id/5627/unc-greensboro
 * https://www.soccerwire.com/college-team/unc-greensboro-men/?filter=eyJzb3J0X2J5IjoibWV0YS5pc19mZWF0dXJlZC5yYXciLCJzb3J0X2RpcmVjdGlvbiI6ImRlc2MiLCJxdWVyeSI6IiIsInNlbGVjdGVkRmlsdGVycyI6e30sInNlbGVjdGVkUmFuZ2VGaWx0ZXJzIjp7fSwiY3VycmVudFBhZ2UiOjF9
 * Because the last source group fails to reliably cover Descriptions and terms, these sports services will be used to cover them. The question of usability does not rely so much in reliability for these sources but fairness. These sources are usable because they reference every program on the same scale (Hence fairness entails reliability)
 * All references for the stadium will come from UNCG Soccer Stadium