User:DominikKonwinski/Slaves Today/Ataylor41 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) DominikKonwinski
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Slaves_Today&diff=1187654256&oldid=1073320648:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Slaves Today:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- I like how your plot summary isn't too long and doesn't reveal too much about the story like many other articles do.

- The sources you have look like they will be very helpful and will give you a lot more info to add to the wikipedia page.

-I see that there isn't too many edits made on the actual wikipedia page itself, but I think a good section you could potentially add to this is maybe a chapter summary of the story or even a Character List that goes into key details about each character throughout the book.