User:DominikKonwinski/Slaves Today/Bjohn2548 Peer Review

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DominikKnowinski
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The added heading of "Plot" is a really great addition. I like how neutral and concise the plot summary is. I also like your addition of the "critical reception" heading. Since the page is a work in progress, I would consider adding a few more things. I think an info box will be a great addition to this page if short and concise information is needed. Based on the number of references you were able to find, I think the addition of themes found throughout the novel or an analysis of something that you found interesting would be helpful to your page as well. You have also done a great job with citing and linking your sources. This will be a great thing to keep up throughout your page.