User:Dominiquemm98/George Floyd protests in San Diego County, California/Shassan98 Peer Review

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Scooper36


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 * User:George Floyd protests in San Diego County, California
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 * George Floyd protests in San Diego County, California

Introduction:
Some grammatical errors within the very first paragraph, you should definitely look over the paragraph one more time.

Content:
Policy responses need more source citations. There also appears to be two sections for Poway, for some reason. Also, is Oceanside even considered part of San Diego County?

Tone and balance:
No bias detected, neutral tone throughout!

Sources and references:
Just as a mention - FOX is not always a reliable source. They have been caught lying about protests. I would suggest looking for other sources if I were you.

Organization:
Easy to read, succinct, I like that each protest is separated by date. Makes it easy to read.

Overall impression:[edit]
This article is written pretty well - very fact-based and easy to read. All of the links appear to be working, but as I pointed out Fox news has been caught lying before, so I suggest trying to find other sources. Correcting some of the content problems that I mentioned should clean this article right up.

Good job!