User:Dooley1836/Andrea Villarreal/Guadalupequinones Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Dooley1836 article on Andrea Villarreal
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dooley1836/Andrea_Villarreal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Andrea Villarreal

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I think that during the lead, there could be a bit more detail regarding her referral as the Mexican Joan of Arc. I would suggest to include a brief explanation of why they called her this? Was it a specific event, action, or phrase?

Also, is there a page for the Lampazos Workers Union? You could either link a page or briefly explain what the Lampazos Woker Union stood for or the significance. I think that it would be contextualize Villarreals political standing. Were they exposed to the social issues of the town because of the union, or were they a part of smaller forms of activism?

Also, I would suggest hyperlinking Porfirio Diaz' page of context. I believe there should be one for him (I used it in my entry). I would also suggest adding a bit more historical context to the motives behind them fleeing. I know you said political climate, but was it centered around the revolution? economic tensions? Before you introduce the PLM leaders that were held captive, I think you should hyperlink their pages or briefly explain their importance within the part. Perhaps mention the Flores Magon contribution with Regeneracion. In the revolutionary work section you explain how Andrea actually wrote for Regeneracion, so I think introducing it with the Magon brothers would make it flow better.

I would be interested to know what their Chicana Feminist agendas consisted of. Were they fighting for a specific issue? For example, I am writing my piece on La Mujer Moderna itself and it was previously described as a feminist magazine, but the context are so interdisciplinary that their term foes not do it justice. I would suggest trying to make this more specific by talking about feminism in a specific context. Was it to encourage women to join war efforts?

It seems like you are working on your analysis of the “Que Hacéis Aquí Hombres?" piece as a means of encouraging men to join revolution efforts in Mexico, and I am excited to read more. I do think that this offers a very good place to include Villarreal's position of women joining war efforts.

The sources look good, except the second one is missing a date, so I would advise you to include that. Also, the organization is good, I would just get rid of the arrows in front of the first word of your new sections.

I am excited to read more! Good job!

-Guadalupe Quiñones