User:Dooley1836/Andrea Villarreal/Rafahorle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dooley1836


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Dooley1836/Andrea_Villarreal&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Andrea Villarreal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead has not been updated and is currently only one sentence. I think adding a short one paragraph summary about the rest of the article would be nice!

Content and Tone

The content added to the article is useful and up to date. The tone is neutral and effectively conveys Villarreal's political beliefs without agreeing or disagreeing with her. An explanation as to why she is referred to as the Mexican Joan of Arc and a section about her impact on Mexican culture would be interesting!

Sources

All the links included work and the sources are reliable and fairly up to date. My main suggestion regarding the sources is to add more primary sources. Although it may be hard to find, letters and journals written by Villarreal could be used in the article!

Organization

The content is easy to follow and concise. I found one small grammar mistake in the section about her journalistic work. Instead of "The Villarreal’s" it should be "The Villarreals'". The sections are really well organized and make sense!

Overall Impression

I think this is a great article so far! The Article Body has improved a lot from the original one and interesting sections were added to the article! I think my main advice is to explain and explore Villarreal's political beliefs and impact a bit more.