User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science/Ejohnson7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doom of Malanti


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal science

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: The lead seems to be updated with the sentence "Animal science degrees are often offered at land-grant universities, which will often have on-campus farms to give students hands-on experience with livestock animals." It is useful information because the article mentions that information later on. The lead has a good amount of information, where it sums up what the article mentions, but isn't too much or too little.

Content: The content added is very good and relevant to the topic. You expanded on the topic very well and added the areas of study to help the reader understand the different areas of study for animal science that are under the broader topic of animal science. The information is up-to-date, having most sources being from 2021. I like how you created two new sections and found information for the two.

Tone and Balance: The content you added is neutral and aren't biased. This topic is difficult to be biased about, but the information is presented in a neutral way and you kept an unbiased tone.

Sources and References: You did a really good job in finding a diverse spectrum of sources, especially reliable sources. From journals, to articles to databases, they come from a wide variety of publishers. All of the links worked, except for the first one in the sandbox. All of these sources are current, being from 2021. You did a good job of summarizing what the source says and putting it into your own words for the article.

Organization: Adding two new sections helped with your organization and making it easy to read. Your words are well-written and makes sense to the reader.