User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science/Jenila Tamang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doom of Malantai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doom%20of%20Malantai/Animal_science?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal science
 * Animal science

Evaluate the drafted changes
1. Lead: There is no lead explanation.

2. Content: The article covers the area of study of animal science really well.

3. Tone and balance: I think tone and balance is neutral. It explains the specific information of each career without being biased.

4. Sources and references: I couldn't open any source from the reference list.

5. Organization and writing quality: The writing organization and quality if okay.

6. Images and media: There is no image in this article.

7. Overall impression: It is informative and interesting to know how animal science is contributing to different sub-fields.