User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science/Jnguy1004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doom of Malantai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doom%20of%20Malantai/Animal_science?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal science

Evaluate the drafted changes
No added Lead

The content is neutral and does not persuade the reader in any way. It is current and up to date and adds much needed info to what the article is lacking.

Very easy to read and overall good job with wording, just one error with mispelling.

No images added

I thought the information was good and would make the article better.