User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science/JustynR10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doom of Malantai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doom%20of%20Malantai/Animal_science?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal science
 * Animal science

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you've done a really good job of elaborating and expanding ideas based around the article. It is a very interesting topic and it would be cool to have more information on the topic.