User:Doom of Malantai/Animal science/Karinlama Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doom of Malantai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doom%20of%20Malantai/Animal_science?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal science

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead: There is no lead.
 * Content: The article comprises the animal science information really well.
 * Tone and balance: Tone and balance is fine. It clearly explains the different career sections of Animal Science.
 * Sources and references: The sources are reliable.
 * Organization and writing quality: The writing organization and quality is neutral.
 * Images and media: There are no images.
 * Overall impression: The article is okay but a lot of information should be added.