User:Doorleym1/Christian Watson/Ryanmullaneygt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mitch Doorley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doorleym1/Christian_Watson?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Christian Watson

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added by Mitch into his draft makes the article stronger. The lead provides a brief overview about who Christian Watson is and what he does, as well as a few sentences about his background information (birthday, schools, hometown). The lead overall includes a brief description of the articles major sections mentioning information about his high school, college, and professional career which are the main points of the article. The content he added is relevant to the topic. He added a Statistical Chart of Watson's high school football teams. He also added additional information throughout the article in different sections, enhancing the details and information regarding Christian Watson. I think Mitch could add a little more information into the "Personal Life" section because it's a little brief but that could be just because there isn't much information about his personal life today. The content Mitch added is neutral and doesn't give opposing viewpoints. Overall, I think the additions made to the article add great information and fit the context well.