User:Dorian.2x/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The Yard (Howard University)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article grabbed my attention as I am a Howard University student who walks the yard on a daily basis. Before attending Howard University, I remember watching Youtube videos and the Youtubers would be clogging on the yard. I thought it was so beautiful and I imagined myself walking the yard or get to class. I also would see Howard University students take pictures on the yard with Founders Library in the back. Now that I attend Howard University, the yard is somewhere I go to hang out with my friends. The vibes and the energy on the yard are immaculate. When I seen there was an article about the yard, it immediately had an interest.

Evaluate the article
The article didn't flow well at all. I tried to go in and take out unneeded information, add better information, add commas, add better grammar and overall make it flow better.