User:DorkyPotatoGang/Gott v. Berea College/Carali25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DorkyPotatoGang


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DorkyPotatoGang/Gott_v._Berea_College?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Starting with your lead, it is very strong and I see how much you have improved it from what it was before this was assigned. It seems to be concise and gives a complete idea of what is in the whole article. Your article is also very easy to follow and structured well. I think your tone and balance from start to finish is quite neutral and unbiased. Just glancing at your sources it seems you have a wide range of secondary sources that you used. I also was highly impressed with your significance section that you added, I believe that it adds to the topic and why this case is still relevant to people today. The only advice I think I could give you that would help improve this article is too add more sources (if applicable) such as jstor, textbooks, secondary sources, etc. just to make your paper stronger and have the highest levels of creditability. Great work so far !