User:DoubleDub2021/Clumping (biology)/Hcg35 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DoubleDub2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Clumping (biology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Clumping (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article had some solid content. From speaking to the author, it was understood that there was not much academic writing covering this topic, which was clumping. However, the author put together a very nice article. There was a little to be desired in terms of spacing. To be specific, the measurement and microbiology articles could probably be separated. The paper was informative and did not sway the reader in one way or another. The paper as a whole conveyed the information very well.