User:DoubleQuarterPounder123/Animal repellent/Gvargas1oo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am working on DoubleQuarterPounder's article.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DoubleQuarterPounder123/Animal_repellent?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DoubleQuarterPounder123/Animal_repellent/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography

Evaluate the drafted changes
An animal repellents is any thing or method that keeps certain animals away from stealing or damaging certain objects, areas, people, plants, or other animals. To this end, living organisms emit special semiochemicals naturally. However, humans purposely make use of some of those while also designing other repellents.

Changes I made:

Animal repellants consist of any object or method designed with the intention of keeping animals away from personal items as well as food or even yourself. Plants and other living organisms possess a special ability to emit chemicals known as semiochemicals all by themselves as a way to defend themselves from predators. Given human intelligence, we have created a way to repel animals through various forms of protection.

Moving forward, I would add sources to back up the idea of humans using repellants and what kinds are used for specific types of animals. Another aspect is just adding sources for things you wouldn't of already known about like semiochemicals, try and explain what that is in your own words.