User:Dovaleca/Lake Michigan/Rosemary Guo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dovaleca


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dovaleca/Lake_Michigan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Michigan

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall is a really great Wiki reading, which has really clear leads and each paragraph is short that will be easy to follow.


 * The hyperlinks with academic words and terms, 'Epilimnion', 'Thermocline', and 'Hypolimnion', help people who know a little about limnology undarstand your reading. But some the hyperlinks seems not really necessary, such as 'fishing', 'swimming' and 'boating' in Salinity part.
 * For the 'Water Quality Standards', the content seems not really optimum with the leads. You mainly talk about how nutrients affect the water quality, but the standard things seems too general. Maybe you can talk more about the standards.
 * And some abbreviation in paragraphs are a little confused, such as the 'PNAS' in Salinity (Under Hydrology). I don't know what this abbreviation refers to. Maybe you could support its full name or put a hyperlink in it.
 * For the second paraghraph in Drinking Water Addition part, due to the lack of standard in Michigan, people may put pollution in to lakes without control. Then, the harmful elements level in Lake Michigan may higher. There seem to be a logical problem.
 * In 'Hydrology Addition' part, I may want to know more about the reason that stratification happened in different period,. Does that cause by the change of climate factors?
 * For the references, Wiki seems can automaticlly generate it if you click the 'cite' button on the top of the screen. You need to change it.

Anyway, it a pretty good job, and I really enjoy reading it!