User:Dovaleca/Lake Michigan/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dovaleca


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dovaleca/Lake Michigan


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Michigan

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Carly, Lizzy here. Nice job on your first draft, you exceeded both the required word count and references. I really appreciated your use of headings, I think this is a very useful tool within Wikipedia and it will make the information you added more accessible to the public.

Things to improve on before the final draft is due: Make sure you use the citation tool at the top of the edit bar ("Cite) this will allow you to copy and paste your citations into the Wikipedia format and it will automatically arrange your citation list based on when you cite things throughout the article. (the one point I took away was for not using the citation tool).

If you change your heading to Lake Michigan Limnological Topics, it will be more in line with what we were hoping to add. Finally, make sure you include specific research findings that have come from this lake. There is a TON of research on Lake Michigan so this shouldn't be too difficult. Thanks for your hard work and let us know if you have any questions.