User:Dowk29/Nutrition/Ahite Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dowk29


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dowk29/Nutrition


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nutrition

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you explained how metabolism works and used an example to help. You also kept a neutral tone or point or view throughout which can sometimes be difficult but you displayed well with the information you gave. I think that this will be an important addition the the article you are editing. After reading the original article, here are some things they you could possibly edit or add to the article in the future:


 * add more to the introduction
 * further explain the nutritional groups
 * list example of how someone can receive the seven major classes of nutrients
 * provide more information in the diet section (what a healthy diet consists of)
 * In the human nutrition section, list positive health outcomes
 * also expand on what poor nutrition can do in humans
 * Some small additions can be changed with grammar
 * If you want to add a new section, you can include how to get help with nutrition
 * Be sure to include sources with whatever you add
 * You can also add a picture since there really isn't one in the article (just make sure you follow the Wikipedia rules)