User:Dpcole/Cadillac Escalade/Jjjbrz985 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dpcole


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dpcole/Cadillac_Escalade?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dpcole/Cadillac_Escalade?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the subject and how it describes different year models. I'd like to learn more about the history of Cadillac and the Escalade models.

There is no history in the sandbox version and it just has the model information listed. This may be because it is in progress and pasted in there.

There is history I literally wrote about every year made and model. (response)

I didn't see a link for the original article, but there is no lead section it just starts with the model information.

Links are at the bottom of the page.(response)

There were no footnotes or links for the citations just a reference list at the end.

Citation feature is broken and the wiki people been of no help to get it working.(response)

I think once it is complete it will have more information because it is maybe a section that is in progress, but nice information and article.