User:Dpe12/2020 United States elections/Strr34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dpe12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dpe12/2020 United States elections


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2020 United States elections

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

It's certainly relevant to the event and the page. Maybe you could add more about how voters viewed the change, i.e. found how well socialism polled or what the average voter thought it meant. Also the ending of the paragraph should be cited from somewhere or deleted.

Tone:

Seems to be well balanced.

Organization:

I guess you don't specify but personally I'd place it right at the end of the issues section above the part that starts "the rhetoric of Trump" etc. etc.

Overall it's informative and relevant but it's kind of brief and you could discuss the implications more.