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Peer Review
Hi David! This is Claire from your History of Science class. I have read over your draft for the Miriam Menkin Article. You have gathered some great information and I am excited to see it transformed into an entire article for this female scientist. I really like how you have divided up your information into the various headings. If possible, I would reword the last sentence in your lead section, it sounds like they were supposed to have the children, but didn't. Perhaps just changed the wording and verbiage to "had two children..." It would also be awesome to see some expansion on the select publications and give some explanation. I like that you have cross-referenced and linked other wikipedia articles to words or phrases in your own work. While reading through your draft, I found myself clicking on a few of the medical terms to better understand the context. I applaud you for explaining her contributions to the history of science without using bias or using wording that suggest any kind of convincing argument. Your neutrality is apparent throughout your subsections. If you would like any further peer review as you expand your article, please let me know! Good luck on the remainder of this work!Claire.l.m (talk) 04:51, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Hey Claire! Thank you very much for the feedback. I love your idea of expanding on the publications that I provided; I think it will make that section more complete. I also can see that the sentence you mentioned is worded strangely and I will definitely take your advice and alter it. You gave me some great suggestions that will help me round out my article, and I really appreciate it! Good luck finishing your article as well. David Potts (talk) 20:14, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

Miriam Menkin Article Draft
Miriam Friedman Menkin (8 August 1901-June 8 1992), née Miriam Friedman, was an American scientist who was most famous for her in vitro fertilization (IVF) research with John Rock. In February 1944, she became the first person to conceive human life outside of the body.

Menkin was born on August 8th, 1901, in Riga, Latvia. She and her family moved to the United States two years after she was born. Her father worked as a doctor in New York City and was successful enough to let her family live comfortably. In 1922, Menkin graduated from Cornell University with an undergraduate degree in histology and comparative anatomy. She attended Columbia University for her graduate program and earned a master's degree in genetics only one year after graduating from Cornell. She taught biology and physiology for a short period while setting her sights on medical school. However, women were rarely admitted to medical school during this time period and Menkin was not accepted. Menkin married Valy Menkin, a Harvard medical student, in 1924. She still aimed to earn a Ph.D. in biology, but she needed to provide financial support while her husband finished medical school. Thus, Menkin obtained another undergraduate degree in secretarial studies from Simmons College. Menkin ended up finishing the Harvard Ph.D. requirements two separate times but did not receive a degree because she could not afford the course fees.

Menkin and Valy had two children: a son named Gabriel and a daughter named Lucy.

Early Research (1930-1938)
Following a few years of work as a secretary, Menkin served as a pathology research fellow at Harvard Medical School from 1930 to 1935. She was then offered a job as a laboratory technician for Gregory Pincus at Harvard. While working for Pincus, Menkin was tasked with preparing extracts designed to superovulate rabbits in Pincus' quest to create "fatherless" rabbits. Pincus lost his tenure at Harvard in 1937, which left her without a job. She worked in the state laboratories of Massachusetts for a year and then applied for a research position with John Rock, a fertility doctor, at the Free Hospital for Women (now part of Brigham and Women's Hospital) in Boston. Pincus' rabbit experiments had been a factor in Rock's decision to start IVF research, and Menkin's role in the experiments caught Rock's eye. Rock soon hired Menkin and they set out to determine the exact time at which ovulation would occur. Rock had come up with the idea but had not made any meaningful progress in laboratory research before hiring Menkin. He did not have an advanced understanding of the technical aspects of egg fertilization and hired Menkin to oversee all of the laboratory work.

IVF Research and Discovery (1938-1944)
Menkin began the IVF experiments in March 1938. Rock and Menkin requested that the women participating in the study, who were scheduled to undergo hysterectomies, have unprotected sex prior to the surgery. They elected to carry out the surgical procedures just before the patient would ovulate, which gave them many suitable ova for the study. Over the course of the study, Menkin followed a fairly steady weekly schedule: find eggs on Tuesday, add sperm on Wednesday, pray on Thursday, and observe the outcome on Friday. She made variations to the procedure every so often, altering the conditions the eggs were kept in and the length and concentration of the sperm samples. Menkin would find the unfertilized eggs in the ovaries that Rock removed from the patients, put the eggs in the solution, and then culture them before adding sperm. In the first 6 years of the study, Menkin tried many different strategies but did not achieve IVF. On February 3rd, 1944, she obtained an egg from a woman whose cervix and uterus prolapsed following the birth of four children. Menkin's standard protocol was to wash the sperm sample 3 times in solution and let the egg and sperm interact for 30 minutes. However, she had stayed up with her newborn daughter the night before, and on that day she mistakenly washed the sperm sample only once, used a more concentrated sample, and allowed one hour of interaction. The following Friday morning (February 6th, 1944), Menkin found that cell cleavage had begun, which indicated that a fertilized egg had formed. Menkin neglected to take an immediate photograph of the discovery, and she could not find the egg when she finally went to get a picture. She was able to fertilize and photograph three more eggs, involving all three factors that she had altered before the original discovery. Rock and Menkin achieved two and three cell development in their successful fertilizations. After the additional eggs were fertilized successfully, Rock and Menkin elected to publish their work in a brief report. Science magazine published their findings in the article “In Vitro Fertilization and Cleavage of Human Ovarian Eggs" on August 4th, 1944. The Associated Press, New York Times, and Time magazine ran accounts of the discovery in the following days.

Public Reaction to Discovery
Rock and Menkin's discovery was largely viewed by the public as a positive breakthrough that would help infertile couples have children. However, some critics saw it as playing God and interfering with the laws of nature, and because Rock and Menkin did not create a physical baby, others questioned if they had achieved in vitro fertilization at all. Rock and Menkin did not attempt to transfer their fertilized eggs into a woman's body after their achievement because it was not the goal of their study. The difficult task of transforming a multi-cell fertilized egg, like the one Menkin and Rock had created, into an embryo that could grow inside a woman's uterus was not successful until the birth of Louise Brown in 1978.

Later Years
At the time Science ran the article, Valy had recently been fired by Harvard and the Menkin's had been forced to relocate to North Carolina. Menkin was able to stay in touch with Rock and work on additional publications. The full report of the discovery, in which Menkin was listed as the lead author, was finally published in 1948 with the same title, "In Vitro Fertilization and Cleavage of Human Ovarian Eggs", in the American Journal of Obstetrics and Gynecology. In the years before this, Menkin sought to continue IVF research on her own, but her opportunities were limited and unpaid. After a few fruitless years attempting to replicate her success, Menkin divorced from her husband in 1949. She and her children returned to Boston, where she accepted an offer to return to Rock's laboratory. IVF research had ceased in Rock's lab since Menkin had departed, as he had been unable to find another scientist with the technical skill to continue Menkin's work. She attempted to revitalize it when she returned, but by that time Rock had shifted his primary focus to research on the birth control pill and Menkin was only able to work on IVF for a short time. She would continue to work in Rock's lab, assisting him on his research and his publishings on the birth control pill, but never received another opportunity to pursue IVF. Menkin died on June 8th, 1992, in Boston, Massachusetts.

Select Publications

 * The original report on Rock and Menkin's IVF discovery.


 * The full report on the IVF discovery that was published 4 years after the original report.


 * A discussion of why menstruation occurs and how it works. Largely focuses on the role of hormones in the process.


 * Discusses observations of a fertilized ovum removed in a hysterectomy on its fourteenth day of existence.


 * Reports the results of an experiment testing the effectiveness of artificial light in regulating the menstrual cycle.


 * Examines the drug stilbestrol (now known as diethylstilbestrol), which was incorrectly used to lower the risk of pregnancy complications in the mid-19th century. It is now known that the drug increases the risk of breast cancer.

Miriam Menkin Source List
My initial list of sources for the Menkin article:

Dubow, Sara. Ourselves Unborn: A History of the Fetus in Modern America. New York: Oxford UP, 2011. Print.

"First Human Eggs Fertilized in a Laboratory." PBS. PBS, n.d. Web. 03 Nov. 2016.

"First Human In Vitro Fertilization Experiments in the United States, 1944-1948. John Rock Papers." Countway Repository. Center for the History of Medicine at Harvard Medical School, 29 May 2009. Web. 03 Nov. 2016.

Marsh, Margaret S., and Wanda Ronner. The Fertility Doctor: John Rock and the Reproductive Revolution. Baltimore: Johns Hopkins UP, 2008. Print.

Rodriguez, Sarah. "Watching the Watch-Glass: Miriam Menkin and One Woman’s Work in Reproductive Science, 1938–1952." Taylor & Francis Online. Taylor & Francis Group, 06 May 2015. Web. 03 Nov. 2016.

Ruffenach, Stephen. "Rock-Menkin Experiments." The Embryo Project Encyclopedia. Arizona State University, 13 Jan. 2009. Web. 03 Nov. 2016.

Saetnan, Ann Rudinow., Nelly Oudshoorn, and Marta Kirejczyk. Bodies of Technology: Women's Involvement with Reproductive Medicine. Columbus: Ohio State UP, 2000. Print.

Valone, DA. "The Changing Moral Landscape of Human Reproduction: Two Moments in the History of in Vitro Fertilization." The Mount Sinai Journal of Medicine, New York. 65.3 (1998): 167-72. Print.

Miriam Menkin Wikipedia Entry
I chose to do my Wikipedia entry on Miriam Menkin. She was a laboratory technician who became the first person to successfully fertilize a human egg outside of the body. She does not yet have a Wikipedia entry, but I plan to create one so people can see her impact on fertility research. I will write about her life and background, her work with in vitro fertilization, and her contributions to the history of science.

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