User:Dr.pepperlvr/Dinka mythology/Wadlet Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dr.pepperlvr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dr.pepperlvr/Dinka mythology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dinka religion

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Dr.pepperIvr, so far from what I have read, the article seems unbiased and it did a pretty good job of introducing me to a topic I know next to nothing about. The sources all seem to be high quality. There were a few places that could benefit from some additions or further clarification. Since Nhialic the creator god seems so central to what has been talked about in the article, it would not hurt to add some more information about him. It may help to balance the article a little more considering the bulk of the article seems to reference him. You could also consider adding more information about the pantheon of other major gods to help balance how much of the article is about Nhialic. The article also mentions "ex-nihilo" without giving any explanation of what that is or why it may be important. This is really the only part of the article that I felt lost while reading it. I hope some of these suggestions help.