User:DrFRahlouni/Pediatric intensive care unit/Medicalendeavor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DrFRahlouni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pediatric intensive care unit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pediatric intensive care unit

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this article has shown vast improvement. Here are a few comments regarding each section.


 * Lead: great introductory sentence that summarizes what a PICU is. The sentence starting with "The unit may also have" may not be necessary in the lead as additional members of the PICU staff are listed in the "Characteristics" section. A sentence referring to the different levels of care later discussed in the article may be added to the lead paragraph.
 * Content: Relevant to topic and up-to-date. Personal preference: rename "Characteristics" section to "PICU environment and staff". I appreciate the external links added to the "Common Conditions" section and beyond. I would also expand the certification section to include certifications that doctors need to practice in the PICU.
 * Tone and Balance: article is written in a neutral and non-biased tone.
 * Sources and references: Relevant sources were used and links work. A few sentences lack proper citation, but I believe editor is working on that due to "citation needed" notation.
 * Organization: sections of article are well organized and important aspects of the topic were addressed.
 * Images and media: Picture is helpful. Adding to the infobox may be beneficial.
 * Overall, great work! Strengths demonstrated by this article are the breadth of information that is covered regarding the topic as well as the neutral unbiased tone. I would suggest continuing to cite references in the body text and adding to the infobox.