User:DrPronoun/Algorithmic radicalization/Gobears18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DrPronoun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DrPronoun/Algorithmic_radicalization?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Algorithmic radicalization

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added about Algorithmic Radicalization is up to date and references movies produced in the last few years relating to the topic. The content is portrayed in a neutral tone simply stating the definition such as a "lone wolf" or what the movie was attempting to say. There is a variety of sources and over ten links to provide multiple sources as evidence for their sentences. The content is direly needed as the current article has three sentences. The writing is in good grammar and very easy to read giving the reader a clear understanding of what Algorithmic Radicalization is. The only advice I would suggest would be to add an image to the wikipedia site depicting Algorithmic Radicalization.