User:Drabkin247/Judy Freespirit/Shayan20011 Peer Review

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I believe this group did an exceptional job on depicting the life of Judy Freespirit. Given there is not much information online about this individual, I think this group utilized sourced they found and expanded on them very well, giving the readers much more information on her ethnic and social backgrounds. One notation I took while reading her bibliography was a lack of information on her childhood life and growing up where I could not find much information but other than that I think the group did a great job at detailing and depicting her character in this Wiki page. As a draft, this is a great beginning and I cannot wait to see the group add more content to this article as it is not repetitive and is not similar to many other pages online. -Shayan