User:Drabkin247/Sampat Pal Devi/AmandaGong Peer Review

Lead

There is no lead section. Maybe add a brief summary of the bibliography to provide the audience with an overall of the whole content.

Content

I think maybe adding a little bit more background information would be helpful. I recognized that in the first paragraph, it was briefly talked about how women were treated poorly in Banda. Because it was the main motivation for Sampat Pal Devi to create the Gulabi Gang, maybe separating that information into a "background section" would be helpful for understanding.

Also, I feel like when talking about a person's bibliography, it is most helpful to organize each event into timelines. Right now, it is not very clear how the event progressed.

Tone

The tone overall is neutral and good job!

Sources

The first whole paragraph comes without citation. Maybe to add a proper reference for this section?

Also, for the reference section, two of the references were marked in red, maybe double check those?

Media

For the "media appearance" section, I recognize that you have cited the film, but if some photos or videos could be found and they are open-sourced, maybe directly including them in here would be helpful.