User:Drabkin247/Sampat Pal Devi/Tnawathe Peer Review

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Drabkin247
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sampat Pal Devi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sampat Pal Devi

Lead
The lead section for this sandbox draft is missing.

Content
The content added is very relevant to the topic and up-to-date as well, with the most recent sources being from last year. It could be relevant to also add a section related to the impact of the Gulabi Gang, and how its creation incited a change in public/community sentiments. How did people react to the Gulabi Gang? How did the Gulabi Gang recruit more members? What significance did the Gulabi Gang hold in the community? There is some information on this topic already, such as a re-centering of society's associations with the color pink, but adding more concrete impacts would be great. The section heading can also be called "The Power and Impact of the Color Pink."

Something else that can be added to the article is an overview on Sampat Pal Devi's childhood and early years to highlight what motivated her to form the Gulabi Gang. Another idea is to add a timeline for the article that summarizes when the Gulabi Gang formed, major events that the Gulabi Gang was involved in, and all of the other events related to Sampat Pal Devi such as when she went on Big Boss and when she formed the school.

Tone and Balance
The tone and content is balanced, with the article discussing the Gulabi Gang's initiatives as well as the controversy surrounding the group. Overall, there is no feedback here!

Sources and References
The first section on the leadership of the Gulabi Gang is missing any source citations -- these should be added in before the article is published. Some of the citations in the references page also need to be fixed, because it seems like the auto-citation template was used but there is some information that is missing from the citations. Other than that, there are some articles that do not appear to be scholarly, such as Slate and Firstpost. It might be helpful to double check the reliability of these sources to ensure that all the information is accurate and trustworthy.

Organization
The content is well structured and easy to read!

Images and Media
There are currently no images added to the article. Adding some could help enhance the understanding of the Gulabi Gang.

Overall Impressions
Overall I thought the article has been improved a lot! There is a good amount of new, relevant information that has been added to provide a more comprehensive understanding of the topic. With the exception of the missing lead section and minor mistakes with citations, the article looks great!