User:Drcarver22/Bark beetle/Mmahmed1 Peer Review

The article presents an overview of Bark Beetle from different aspects such as Life cycle and morphology and Description and ecology which is well organized. However, some points could be improved.

1- A lead section or introductory sentences may be required for the edited section, for example, something could be mentioned about the predation process and chemicals that will be discussed in this edited version.

2- Under the Bark Beetles title (first one), I would recommend putting b and c under a separate subheading (with appropriate title) as they seem to be relevant to each other not to this title.

3- Chemical and Bark Beetle attacks title looks clear what information you want to discuss. However, I believe it could be improved into something like chemical interaction (or interplay) between Bark Beetles and ......

4- Under the Chemical and Bark Beetle attacks section, I think Monoterpenes are a class of pheromones for these organisms (is it?), if yes, it is better to be under the same title or it could be presented as an example for the pheromones.

5- If any visual images are added it might make this more interesting.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Drcarver22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Drcarver22/Bark_beetle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bark beetle

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article presents an overview of Bark Beetle from different aspects such as Life cycle and morphology and Description and ecology which is well organized. However, some points could be improved.

1- A lead section or introductory sentences may be required for the edited section, for example, something could be mentioned about the predation process and chemicals that will be discussed in this edited version.

2- Under the Bark Beetles title (first one), I would recommend putting b and c under a separate subheading (with appropriate title) as they seem to be relevant to each other not to this title.

3- Chemical and Bark Beetle attacks title looks clear what information you want to discuss. However, I believe it could be improved into something like chemical interaction (or interplay) between Bark Beetles and ......

4- Under the Chemical and Bark Beetle attacks section, I think Monoterpenes are a class of pheromones for these organisms (is it?), if yes, it is better to be under the same title or it could be presented as an example for the pheromones.

5- If any visual images are added it might make this more interesting.

Thank you for your feedback. I have created a small introduction/ lead statement on this article within the current link I added. Look in the "General Info" and select the link. However, I can do more, which I should and I will do. Thank you for your advise and information. A. Thomas response.

Second peer review
The article has an improvement after the first round; however, I noticed a few things that might be missed because I looked at the sandbox page.

1- I suggest adding subheadings to spread out the information you are presenting in your topic.

2- I also recommend arranging your reference as they appeared not in the right order (1, 2, 3, ....).

3- I believe it could be reasonable to add a title under your topic something like chemical interaction (or interplay) between Bark Beetles and ......

4- I would recommend adding a figure or image to make it more interesting.

Thanks,

Thank you for your reviews. I will make sure I make all necessary corrections. Thank you for your patience.