User:Drcarver22/Southern Pine Beetles, their chemicals, and the reactions/Alexis D Wagner Peer Review

 2022/11/06 Second Peer Review 

Your first sentence "Southern Pine Bark Beetle (SPB), also known as Southern Pine Beetle" I am not sure is a complete sentence I think maybe changing it to "Southern Pine Bark Beetle (SPB) are also known as Southern Pine Beetle." '''That was a typo. I will fix the mistake. Thank you> ALAAT'''

Trying using more links, link the pages of the tree species.

I am a little confused by this sentence in your second paragraph, maybe I am not reading it correctly, but I would rephrase this sentence: "She colonizes the selects the host the tree."

In paragraph three maybe link to the Fontalin page (if there is one)

Everything so far looks pretty great! I edited a few grammatical things on your sandbox which obviously you don't have to keep, but so far the page sounds really good and was easy to follow. I found your topic very interesting and definitely chemical ecology specific. Great work so far! If you want me to look over it again before we publish our final Wikipages just slack me, good luck!

 First Peer Review 

Off to a great start! I know I have heard you talk a bit about your research project and am sure it will be great. My only advice overall is just to make sure to bring the chemical ecology side into it. I know there is alot to write on each of our articles, but it is essential to make sure the main topic of your article still pertains to chemical ecology. Also, it helps a lot too if you go back through and add links to over articles when your are finished to allow easy access to some terminology people may not know. Great start so far, HAPPY WRITING! Feel free to let me know if you would like me to look over another later draft too.

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Drcarver22
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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Drcarver22/Southern_Pine_Beetles%2C_their_chemicals%2C_and_the_reactions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Thank you for your review
Thank you for your review. I will make all necessary corrections.