User:Drcase2/Hammerhead shark/Annaaguo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing user Drcase2 on the article on Hammerhead Shark.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Drcase2/Hammerhead_shark?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hammerhead shark

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is apparent that the focus/lead of the addition Drcase2 intends to contribute to the Hammerhead Shark Wikipedia page is that humans are the leading threat to the hammerhead shark population because of the negative impacts of fisheries and shark fin trading. I think that there was a good length of supporting information in regards to the negative impact of fisheries and shark fin trading. By including statistics and comparisons between time and weights it also shows how humans negatively impact the hammerhead shark population in a measured/numerical manner which allows for a different understanding of the impact humans have on the hammerhead shark population. My only recommendation would be to consistently write “hammerhead shark(s)” instead of “hammerhead(s) because it is more specific and would leave no room for confusion. Overall, I think the content is good, the source is reliable, and it is concise and clearly written.