User:Dre Mitchell/Great Bend Aspect/Shelby672 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good qualities:


 * 1) I like how you have already put in your citations and that your references are scholarly.
 * 2) Your headings make a lot of sense for your article and cover lots of information regarding the Great Bend Aspect.
 * 3) It is very clear what the Great Bend Aspect is in your lead.

Recommendations:


 * 1) Your lead mentions the village clusters which is not in the rest of the article.
 * 2) Maybe add it to the inhabitants or artifacts section.
 * 3) I'm assuming you will be but just expand more on your subheadings.
 * 4) Maybe add more details about the subgroups and economy.
 * 5) Provide more details about the location of the Great Bend Aspect.
 * 6) Maybe add a picture of where the counties are located.