User:Dreadnaught127/Rifles for Watie/WikidPuns Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dreadnaught127


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dreadnaught127/Rifles_for_Watie?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rifles for Watie

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Adding the citation giving evidence that the author knew what he was talking about was good. Real world experience helps paint historical fiction in a way that makes it feel authentic. I would try to reduce the comma's in "The setting, west of the Mississippi, is also not typical of Civil War novels, so the reader gets a perspective on the war not generally available in other books, let alone one found in children's books." Very slight rewording would help it flow a little better for the reader.