User:DreeLeigh/Hernan Diaz (writer)/Rickyp1848 Peer Review

General info
Dreeleigh (provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DreeLeigh/Hernan_Diaz_(writer)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hernan_Diaz_(writer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After looking at the original article and the changes made in sandbox. I think the changes made add to the original article very well. It gives more context to who Diaz is and adding one of his books to the works page is very helpful for people looking to get into Diaz. The article maintains a very neutral tone and there is no noticeable tone switch. Making it pretty seamlessly blended in to the already existing text. When checking the references and works used, everything is up to date, relevant and from what I can tell unbiased. The article does add important details of the life of Diaz. a modern Hispanic writer which adds to making Wikipedia a more diverse space. It does help the article is pretty well written with no grammatical errors I could find and pretty good overall structure. All in all, I think this draft looks pretty good. My only real critique is I wonder if more the writers life or works could possibly be added just to give more depth.

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