User:Dreese2/Magnolia Street/X.Kyrstenn.x Peer Review

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dreese2


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 * User:Dreese2/Magnolia Street


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Nice history section that was well rounded and gave brief details behind Magnolia street. If you can maybe also include a picture of the front of the supermarket that way readers can see what it really appears to look like. Also some of the info you talked about in your history section can be pulled into other paragraphs if you want to expand on the crime and other negative influences before Katrina. Other than that you are off to a really strong start and I can't wait to read it once you are done.