User:Dressytea/Lustreware/Emily.850 Peer Review

General info
Dressytea
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dressytea/Lustreware
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Lustreware

Evaluate the drafted changes
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While reading over what you have added to your article Lustreware, I think that overall you have done a great job with inserting more information to the article that was missing before. I see that you have added a section about Lustreware expanding to Western Europe and you explained how it spread from one place to the next. I think maybe you could add more detail about how Lustreware was used in Western Europe instead of just talking about how it expanded there but I think that overall your additions to the article are very informative and complete a missing part of the article but I feel that you could add a little more information about the use of Lustreware.