User:Drobi92/António Ole/Ejleonh680 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) GabbieAmel, Jonahwebs, Drobi92


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Drobi92/Ant%C3%B3nio_Ole?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * António Ole

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It seems that this article is on the way to making some important edits to the article's lead section. I appreciate how the new lead being drafted is offer a more wholistic and organic sounding introduction to the article.

However, this work on the lead seems to be the bulk of the work that's been done on the article thus far. The original article seems rather thinly dressed and in need of some real substantive additions to the section about the artist's career trajectory and style.