User:Drtate22/Maslow's hierarchy of needs/Tgil89 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

drtate22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Maslow's hierarchy of needs - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maslow's hierarchy of needs - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The leading section of this articles gives a wonderfully written overview of the article. However, I would suggest linking some terms to Wikipedia definitions to provide background and clarification in the leading section and throughout the article. In each subsection of “Levels”, there is a lack sources to support the information presented. I would suggest removing or restructuring the definition of self-actualization at the end of the article, finding sources that support this definition should be addressed.

Hello, thank you so much for your feedback. I heavily agree with the changes that need to be made. I am revising them now. Instead of Levels, I think I will call them stages and I will be deleting the self-actualization definition.