User:Dscsd21/Amtrak/Sltiger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Dsdcd21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dscsd21/Amtrak


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Amtrak

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content is very relevant to the topic. You brought in lots of good information like talking about how the season affects the railways. The content does talk about what the sources are talking about and you made it more understandable. The content you added is organized and written very nicely. I think that this improved the article a lot. One thing to think about adding if possible would be how much emissions Amtrak as a company produces through their trains. Another thing that you could add would be adding one or two sentences to the first paragraphs summarizing what you added. You could also add the emissions that dual trains emit.