User:Dsgm3r/Gold digger/Bem2c4 Peer Review

General info

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(Dsgm3r


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 * Gold digger
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gold digger

Heading
The heading has a very limited and unnuanced definition of gold digger that is comparitively short given the length of the other sections. Maybe adding some additional information on the gendered and racialized history of the word. Adding this informfation to the heading section would also help provide wiki's suggested overview of each section after the heading.

Content
The content that is provided gives plenty of space for ellaboration. I think dedicating efforts to "popular culture" and "etymology and usage" could be a great place to address the most commonly engaged ideas about gold digging and address some of the equity gaps between the origins of the term versus it application over time. The "music" section does not provide any texture for the reader to understand why these references are made in music and how that changed in different moments in history. It is also very US-centric. Is gold digging only a term used in the US?

The very sources that are used indicate that contributors have tried to keep up with new scholarship and are proportional to the information given.

Organization
The organization of the existing material flows well. I think that the seperation between popular cuture and society should be more clearly defined, maybe rename the section "society" with "general" and "law" staying, I think the law section is super interesting and could be great to expand on, and adding a section for "occupation" that would allow for a conversation about people who engage in sexual transaction because it is work they prefer to perform.

Images and Media
The images reinforce an idea that white women of the early 20th were the only people thought to be gold diggers. I think a better variety of images and media portraying "gold diggers" would help the viewer to connect the progress and breadth of the term beyond the early 20th century.