User:Dsgm3r/Gold digger/Kailynhill721 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CardamomEnthusiast, Chmw8, Dsgm3r


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Gold digger


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gold digger

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The current lead section is relevant and concise but needs to be updated to include descriptions of the content that will be discussed later in the article.

Etymology and Usage:

This section could possibly include more information about the word's historical usage. For example, expound on how and why it was used in Rex Beach's book.

Society and Culture:

This section should definitely be updated with more relevant content and contemporary examples.

Organization:

The article mentions a couple different times when the term rose to prominence but I think for organizational purposes a section should be dedicated to discussing this.

Content: I suggest adding more information about how the term gold digger is used in hip-hop as well as how this sexual script is used specifically against Black women. The term is heavily racialized and I think that is important to discuss.

In general the article is concise, well organized and balanced but it has some places it could be improved.