User:Dtalla/Anglophone Crisis/KCterm Peer Review

General info
Dtalla- Anglophone Crisis
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dtalla/Anglophone Crisis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anglophone Crisis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that you plan on adding to the original article is definitely relevant to the topic, and your information comes from sources that are recent. This helps to give the article relevant and up to date information on the topic. The tone throughout most of what you have written is neutral and provides a lot of facts. I think at some points in the article, there is a lean towards a non-neutral tone. For example, you wrote "With the crisis boiling came the rise of separatists who committed the most inhumane acts" (Dtalla). Using the word "most" creates a tone that is not neutral and is not technically a fact, since the readers and general public do not actually know that what they did is the 'most' inhumane. I hope that makes sense? I know it's knit-picky, but really it's all that I could find in what you wrote to give pointers on. I think you add really good content to the article you will be adding to. I think the organization of what you wrote makes sense, and your sources that you have added so far look great. Thank you for adding really good facts and details!